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I decided to do this quiz for my alien (Phasmatolian) OC Sabrina Arima

[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/fairy
[] They are physically strong 
[x] They have a rare hair/fur color (Her hair is blue)
[x] Their eyes are an unusual color (her eyes are just black)
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color 
[] They have wings 1
[] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift.
[] They are immortal
[] (if a female) they have large bra size.
[] (if a male) they are very muscular 
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender 
[x] They are telekinetic/pyrogenic/etc (she has the ability to do telekinesis, disappear at will, fly, and go through objects)
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers 
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers 
[] They are a healer
[] They are from a very rich/royal family.
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[/] They have lost one/both of their parents  (She was separated from her parents while traveling through a wormhole)
[] They ran away from home 
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. 
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.
[/] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature (Does an alien count as a mythical creature? I'll count it as half for this one, because it’s not unusual within the universe of the story :giggle: )
[] They never knew their parents 
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender 
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends (She's one lonely girl in need of friends)
[/] They are emo/cutesy. (she is cutesy but definitely not emo)
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They are currently in a relationship  
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities 
[] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations 
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet 
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a 'special type' of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[x] Some part of their body glows (It's normal for Phasmatolians to have their whole body glow)
[] They have a rare/unusual name 
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstice etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth 
[] They are connected with a certain element.
[] They are connected with a certain animal.
[] They always dress like a certain 'label' 
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga 
[x] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood 
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared 
[x] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives (At first she did but she haunted an opera house which scared the crap out of the people who performed there so now she currently lives there)
[] They are hiding from someone/something 
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[x] They are from a different country to where they live (Well, planet)
[/] They are very mysterious/dark (She's mysterious because no one knows much about her species but definitely not dark)
[] They are very lively/happy 
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient 
[] They are from a long line of warriors
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear 
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition 
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are 'the chosen one'
[] They have insomnia                     .
Overall points: 10


Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic.
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[x] They have a short temper 
[/] They enjoy bullying others (I'm counting this for half because she enjoys pranking people and sometimes her pranks can lead to harmful results)
[]They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless

Total Points: 9.5 

 

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.


16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

25+ irredeemable sue

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Blank8598 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the badge!!! Giggle 
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Big-bad-Rocket Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015

Hi so you’re Catholic as well. How you doing? Any devotions to any saints? I have to St. Jude. You know anything about him?

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Danijel-Knez Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Greetings and thank you for the fave!
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Djake Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist

Hey there,

I just dropped in to say: welcome to :iconblackartsociety: ! We're looking forward to seeing more of you.
On an unrelated-to-group note: I love the way you've cartoonified (if that's a word ^^; ) the characters from Star Trek - especially Scotty.  You've managed to keep them recognizable, while still injecting some stylization and a sense of fun.  

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PhoebeShade Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015  Student General Artist
Thank you for the llama! :D
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Kronos2501 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, Lady! Have a look! Andre by Kronos2501
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beatlesgirlfab Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
Thanks for the :llama: :D
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Thank you for the llama badge! :iconllamalaplz:
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Violin100 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
thanks for the llama
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You rock! 
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